to my mother

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Thursday, 28-Apr-2011 7:48:07

to my mother (from a hospital bed)

wires going in to me

wires coming out

i've still yet to discover

what's it all about?

i lie in bed i'm waiting

i'm waiting for some news

do i have a lot of time

or nothing more to lose?

the doctors come and sit with me

try to make me smile

try to make me all relaxed

and distracted for a while

but nothing they do is working

and so i have to say

although you do mean kindly

can you please just go away?

they leave me and i'm lying there

i wonder what to do

it's clear you've done this to me

and i expect no help from you

you just sit there smiling

sit there with a grin

soon you'll lose your child

and find a strength with in

a strength to keep on going

a strength that will not shatter

the fact it still remains

i never really mattered

you never showed your love to me

you never showed you cared

and when i needed you the most

you were never there

so take your sorry storry,

far from this hospital bed

and when you wake tomorrow, you'd be wishing i was dead

but as i said it's okay

you were never there for me

and tomorrow you will suffer,

just you wait and see

Post 2 by chelslicious (like it or not, I'm gonna say what I mean. all the time.) on Thursday, 28-Apr-2011 19:21:08

sadly, I can relate to this poem. however, I hope you know you're worthy of good things regardless of how your mother feels.

Post 3 by squidwardqtentacles (I just keep on posting!) on Thursday, 28-Apr-2011 21:26:17

Daniel, you're going to make me cry on my way to work. You welcomed me onto this board and I didn't know you were ill. I'm sorry to hear it, and I hope you're at least able to stay comfortable.

Post 4 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Friday, 29-Apr-2011 5:08:57

to post 2, hope things are better for you now

to post 3, try and have a good day at work.

thanks for your responses:)

Post 5 by SatansProphet (Forever in the service of Satan, my King...) on Saturday, 18-Jun-2011 11:01:03

Yeesh! I'm so sorry Dan. You deserve a real mom.

Post 6 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Saturday, 18-Jun-2011 17:58:22

i deserve a real life, but depression and anxiety take me over:(